Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Elevator Pitch No.2

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  2. Last time I did the elevator pitch I received a lot of good feedback. One person said to use better language and sound more professional and it helped my pitch a lot. 
  3. What I changed from the last time I did the pitch was my idea. My idea is now a company that is giving advice to Gator Dining and is more concrete. In addition, I wrote out what I was going to say before hand so I came into this assignment more prepared than last time. 


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  1. UnknownFebruary 22, 2016 at 8:25 AM

    Hey Peter! I really like your idea of a service to help improve the dining halls here at UF. I think this could also apply to other campus's as well. I found it really interesting to get notified on your phone of what is going to be served. I think that is a great idea. I also really liked that you were going to survey people to improve the food options. The only difficulty here would be getting willing people to take the survey. As for your pitch, I understand that you were trying to sound more professional, but the pitch was pretty mono toned and boring. You want to engage people in your product so you should have more life in your pitch! Check out mine here: http://feliciaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html

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  2. William WrightFebruary 24, 2016 at 9:10 AM

    Peeeeeeeeeeete,
    Great idea. I think dining halls are an interesting way to become more involved with a body of students that may be willing to spend more. I think it's a difficult endeavour because becoming a food provider on campus is an expensive task. I think it's worth considering. People would definitely enjoy knowing what's to eat beforehand. If you want to see my ideas for students, read here http://williamwright94.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2_16.html

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  3. UnknownFebruary 25, 2016 at 4:47 PM

    Hi Peter,
    I really like your idea, last year I bought a meal and most of food was not as good as I thought. I think it really important for the chief to improve the taste of the food that match the general opinion. My elevator was about food too, although I feel like when implemented may not the response rate to it as expected. The way that you dress up professionally for the pitch was really impressing. Here is the link to my elevator pitch , check it out if you have time. http://jzent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html

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