1. My idea has changed from my last elevator pitch so this one is still a little fresh. My previous idea was a food advising service that I wasn't too passionate about. This idea I enjoy more and could have a real impact on our world. From the feedback of my last pitch I was told I need to be more animated and have more hand motion.
2. I tried to be more active in this video and included a demonstration to make the video seem alive and interactive.
Thank you for watching viewing my blog. I know I am not dressed professionally and I am not to fluid in my speaking. But, please comment below on what I can do to improve my idea! Have a good day.
Hey Peter, I actually commented on one of your earlier elevator pitches and I have to say that this idea blows the other one out of the water. Not only are our fossil fuels running out but it's also killing our environment so obviously there would be great use in your company. I thought it was also smart to show a demonstration to really illustrate the idea. I am genuinely excited to hear more about this and to see where it goes. If you want to check out my post go here http://dbaltar.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Peter, this is one of the most unique ideas I've heard during this course. I can definitely see people being interested in this product as our society becomes more health and environmentally conscious. I do have to ask, however, are you sure that the technology exists to create this product? Gym equipment gets treated pretty rough and I'd worry about breaking a heavier weight just by setting it down. One piece of advice I have for you is to try to include a hook in your pitch. Check out my blog here: http://jakeryanentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
This is AMAZING! So smart and inventive! I think you should definitely pursue it. I think you had a great elevator pitch with a great demeanor and I liked how you included the demonstration. I hope this becomes a real thing!
Hey Peter, I actually commented on one of your earlier elevator pitches and I have to say that this idea blows the other one out of the water. Not only are our fossil fuels running out but it's also killing our environment so obviously there would be great use in your company. I thought it was also smart to show a demonstration to really illustrate the idea. I am genuinely excited to hear more about this and to see where it goes. If you want to check out my post go here http://dbaltar.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeletePeter, this is one of the most unique ideas I've heard during this course. I can definitely see people being interested in this product as our society becomes more health and environmentally conscious. I do have to ask, however, are you sure that the technology exists to create this product? Gym equipment gets treated pretty rough and I'd worry about breaking a heavier weight just by setting it down. One piece of advice I have for you is to try to include a hook in your pitch. Check out my blog here: http://jakeryanentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteThis is AMAZING! So smart and inventive! I think you should definitely pursue it. I think you had a great elevator pitch with a great demeanor and I liked how you included the demonstration. I hope this becomes a real thing!
ReplyDeleteHere is a link to my blog:
http://paigecarlent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html